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MerelyAthinShadow
August 5th, 2006, 00:04
A little something I wrote for my girlfriend, Joanna. I'm adding acoustic parts to it so I can play it at a local coffee shop. ;D This one actually has a rhyme scheme: ABCBCC.

By the way, the title for this came from randomness, I guess. I remembered hearing somewhere that the Inuits have like 200 words for snow, so I googled it, and picked my two favorite ones! They mean "Snow sparkling with moonlight" and "Snow sparkling with starlight." =]

Astrila Tlun

What is this blur I see?
The rooftops appear
To be blending with the sky
Will you stay here with me, my dear?
So that we may never die
And so we’ll forever fly?

Sit with me by this fire
One that we alone have created
Talk to me of things come to past
Though we are uneducated
It seems like this could really last
And I hope it doesn't go too fast

It's moments like these that make me believe
Maybe true beauty can be withheld
It feels great to be a receiver
Under Astrila Tlun's magic spell
And it's moments like these that make me a believer
And I hope to never leave her.

<3

Silver Gage
April 19th, 2007, 21:42
The sylible count for the last two stanza's threw me off, but other wise it is beautiful. I'd love to hear it played. She's a lucky girl.